2013年4月28日 星期日

AWA 自創題目練習-oversimplification (藍寶事件)

The following is based on the story just heard, represent it by AWA structure
A letter from Lan's senior :
"Dear Lan :
Our group recently need people from shooting department to take the exam of distinguished our planes from enemy's. However, I don't think they will get good grades on it. Since you're graduated from national taiwan university, and thus i think you can perform well even you're not from shooting department.
Have a good day ! "
作答區

The argument made by Lan's senior concluded that Lan should take the exam just because he can perform better than people from shooting department. To support this, the writer claims that Lan can get higher grades because he has been graduated from National Taiwan University. At first glance, the writer's argument seems to be somewhat appealing; however, I do not find this argument logically convincing because the conclusion rests on the unsound assumption that people who graduated from higher education will perform better than any other else in any situation.

First of all, in this argument, the senior presumptuously links higher educational background to better performance in any aspect. There is no guarantee this is the case. Apparently, the author failed to consider other factors may also affect the result. For example(要提出對照類的故事), people with higher educational degree mastering in Accounting have difficulty fixing the broken engines. Furthermore, the senior fail to take into account possible explanations for having well performance on exam. There are other factors such as experiences from training in the shooting department, natural-born ability to distinguish one thing from others could cause the better performance.(such as 後面應該接名詞短語不要再帶動詞) Undoubtedly, it is an oversimplification to reduce all factors affecting performance to one single factor: high educational degree.
Secondly(/In addition), since the exam is assumed to be taken by people in shooting department,  it is designed to evaluate their learning outcomes. Making an unrelated person to take the exam completely distorts the original intent of the exam and thus make the grades meaningless. As a result, I don't think the senior should ask Lan for taking the exam.(此不構成論述邏輯上的錯誤,只能說前提在事實上是錯了的)
In conclusion, there are several factors in better performance. The author should offer other evidences to support his assumption that people from NTU perform better than others. Additionally, making people to take the exam which should have been taken by others totally distort the original intent of the exam. Obviously, I don't think  oversimplification and overlook the regulations(議論文不應有此一原因) make the argument unsound.







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資料來源:
http://bairdben.pixnet.net/blog/post/7161443-jason%E8%8B%B1%E6%96%87%E5%AD%97%E5%85%B8-%E8%BB%8D%E9%9A%8A-%E9%83%A8%E9%9A%8A-%E9%9A%8E%E7%B4%9A-%E7%94%A8%E6%B3%95


軍隊英文
 
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中華民國軍 隊軍階是參考美國軍階而制定。由於當時歷史特殊性考量,於1935年,由當時國民政府主席林森任命前 總統 蔣中正先生為五 星特級上將,負責當時中國戰區之最高統帥。所以中國民國目前為止只有前總統 蔣中正先生是五星特級上將。下表僅就目前中華民國一般軍種軍階體制而製:
軍階 Rank
陸軍 Army
海軍 Navy
空軍 Air Force
一級上將(四星)
General Chief of Staff
General Chief of Staff
General Chief of Staff
二級上將(三星)
General
Admiral
General
中將(二星)
Lieutenant General
Vice Admiral
Lieutenant General
少將(一星)
Major General
Rear Admiral
Major General
上校
Colonel
Captain
Colonel
中校
Lieutenant Colonel
Commander
Lieutenant Colonel
少校
Major
Lieutenant Commander
Major
上尉
Captain
Lieutenant
Captain
中尉
1st Lieutenant
Lieutenant Junior Grade
1st Lieutenant
少尉
2nd Lieutenant
Ensign
2nd Lieutenant
一等士官長
Sergeant Major
Master Chief Petty Officer
Chief Master Sergeant
二等士官長
Master Sergeant
Senior Chief Petty Officer
Senior Master Sergeant
三等士官長
Sergeant 1st Class
Chief Petty Officer
Master Sergeant
上士
Staff Sergeant
Petty Officer 1st Class
Technical Sergeant
中士
Sergeant
Petty Officer 2nd Class
Staff Sergeant
下士
Corporal
Petty Officer 3rd Class
Senior Airman
上等兵
Private 1st Class
Seaman 1st Class
Airman 1st Class
一等兵
Private
Seaman
Airman
二等兵
Private Basic
Seaman Apprentice
Airman Basic

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